Wednesday, March 5, 2008

step 9

  1. Friendship: This book has to do alot with friendship because all the kids trust each other and they are all friends like when armpit takes ginny to the concert .

    deceit:This has alot to do with deciet because everybody likes eachother but sometimes they hurt their friends with what they do like when X-ray sells Armpit fake tickets and gets beat up by the cops for it .

    Love:this book has alot to do with love because armpit loves Kaira and she loves him as well as Ginny and Tatiana

3 comments:

Emily D. said...

Who are "all the kids"?
"...sometimes they deceit their friends..." what does that mean? Who is everybody?
"...she loves him as well as ginny and tatiana." Kaira loves Ginny and Tatiana?
Go back and correct the spelling and grammar.

Aubrey N said...

David,
Remember to always capitalize names. Can you explain some more of "the kids". Also, try to fix your spelling and punctuattion. When you take about love, you should read over it and see if it makes sence.

Khalil J. said...

David, make sure you put spaces in your writing.